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Wednesday, November 17, 2010

The Weather Sucks

So, I have tons of stuff to do, but I wrote this today and it needs to go up.



 In The Mist

Without a saddle
I've ridden for too long,
The trail's dust ridden
And lined with dead
Crusted oaks-
I've lost my warmth
And my clothes are
Damp and worn.
Brown hat on top.

I can only trudge on,
Mocked by the Daevas
Casting their forms
Upon my back.
This mist wood will
Be my battle match,
But I've got a light to
Search for-
Perseverance will
Prevail.

PLEASE, let me know what you think. 

I have come up with a new idea...I'll post a poem...then the next time I post one I'll talk about what the last one's inner meaning was. What i'd like to happen is for my followers or anyone reading to leave me a comment and tell me your interpretation of what I wrote. I like when the creative juices are flowing. Hobey-ho.

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